Strokes of Genius (3rd)

Editing and Revision

3rd Grade

The crew will help RALF revise his letters to get them approved by the Intergalactic Reform Council.

RALF has submitted five passionate letters to the Intergalactic Reform Council, each arguing for a cause he believes will transform life across the United Colonies of Earth. But disaster strikes when all five letters are swiftly rejected, not for their outrageous content, but for their “grammatically chaotic” presentation. RALF is devastated and humiliated. With only minutes left on the 12-hour resubmission window, he turns to the crew for help. Students must identify and explain the grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes in RALF’s original letters, then revise them so they meet the Council's standards. If successful, the revised letters will be submitted to the Council, and RALF’s wildest dreams might finally come true.

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